Feedback on My life vision and my business vision and mission statement.

I am looking for feedback on the wording, structure, length, and content of both my personal and business vision/mission statements. Any suggestions, comments and constructive feedback?

My Life Vision Statement

My vision is to use my unique personality, my skills, abilities, my values, dreams, and my passions for men and their families bringing truth, justice, and freedom to those of them who are in captivity, imprisoned, and oppressed and bringing God's grace and mercy to those of them who are mourning, broken hearted, and without hope. My mission will be guided and empowered as I daily choose to walk humbly with God, submitting my body, soul, and spirit, my heart, mind, and my will to His purposes and plans for my life. (Isaiah 59:1-21; Isaiah 61:1-4; Micah 6:8; Proverbs 3:5-6; John 14:12)

Business Vision Statement

For Precision Detective Services to be the national agency of choice for businesses and individuals seeking truth and justice for their businesses and/or their personal lives.

Business Mission Statement

The mission of Precision Detective Services is to diligently seek out and uncover truth and information for our clients, leaving no stone unturned. Our clients will be confident that the information obtained and the services provided will be discreet, thorough, reliable, timely , and in a manner consistent with the company's values and the client's objectives.

Kind regards,

Ryan

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Permalink Reply by Ben Siemens on February 29, 2012 at 2:02pm

Hi Ryan,

I think you are on the right track, but your business statements shouldn't include what your clients do, just what you do. For example, why are your clients confident in your information and why should you be the national agency of choice? Hope this helps.

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Permalink Reply by Michelle Osborn on February 29, 2012 at 9:56pm

I think they sound great & get the point across of your objectives. I don't see how you have revealed too much about your clients really. Only why they will want to use your services. Hope this helps. Good luck!